
The angels plead for her to turn around. One screams loudly that she had time to head home. Another insists she stop her plans immediately. At the same time, the devils encourage her onward to action, reminding her she didn't come all this way just for a quick trip to the state line.
She stepped away from the mirror long enough to slither into her black dress. It plunged low in the front, leaving little to the imagination. Loving the way the silk swirled against her calves as she moved, she began to set the scene.
In the flickering light cast by the candles and crackling fire, the angels pummel her with images...images of her husband...of her children...of her parents smiling at her, so proud as she conducted her first big on air interview. The happy pictures of her life and family flew at a dizzying pace.
These thoughts were not welcome here.
Shaking her head gently, chestnut curls tumbled over her tanned shoulders. The champagne opened with a satisfying pop. Music, soft and sultry, floated out of the speakers.
Staring at the flames, the devils tease her with images so vivid she flushed with excitement. Memories from another time, the not so distant past, left her breathless with anticipation. Waiting was never her forte and the bed loomed so large and inviting...
It wouldn't be long now.
She turned slowly at the sound of the door opening as her guest had arrived. Her painted lips turned upward in a smug grin. The first touch sealed his fate and the battle was won.
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Angels and Demons was a Magpie Tale. Wondering what happens next? Check back on Thursday.
21 comments:
very raw and primitive....I like the way you incorporate the lipstick as power....to sin.
You had me at the title.
I left you a present over on my blog...
Ooh, ooh! I can't wait for more... this is awesome!
An alluring seductress ... amazing how a tube of lipstick can conjure up such powerful imagery.
Good magpie tale,
Joanny
My oh my Jaime. You sure do know how to keep the reader wanting for more.
mmm..i like that...it only takes one shot to win some battles...make that first one count...nicely done jaime...
I loved it! Can't wait for the next issue!
With a swish and a swirl the scene is set and into the lair of the spider steps her unsuspecting guest. Great stuff. I did so enjoy.
Star
Can't wait for the next chapter! Well done.
Cannot wait to see what happens next!
very VERY nice... and great comments too!!!!! ;o)
~shoes~
Steamy! More, more more!
Enchanting femme fatale - well done using the photo prompt.
I'm off to take a cold shower.
Masterfully written
You and your damn hanging endings! LOL. Great writing style!
Now I am curious....
This story excites me in a carnal way.
Secretia
The battle is won...the lipstick foreshadowed her intentions to ignore the angel all along. I'll stay tuned for the next chapter.
movie clip alike,
beautiful job!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/because-she-is-plain-magpie-tale/
my first try,
thank you in advance for reading it.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/sunday-special-2/
5 awards in my post,
enjoy some!
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