Wednesday, March 31, 2010

The Rose

The power went out hours ago. A few strategically placed candles flickered around the dark room. She broke off their kiss to stare into his eyes, trying to psych up the courage to say the words. She opened her mouth then closed it again wordlessly. Whatever this was between them, she didn't want to ruin it with her confession.

I love you.

The realization had shocked her. This was never supposed to be serious. It was supposed to be light. Fun. Hot as hell.

Despite both being in relationships with other people, nothing about this felt wrong. In fact, nothing had ever felt more right. She snaked her arms around his neck and pulled him in for another kiss. One which she hoped conveyed everything she felt but could not say.

This time he was the one to pull back. "Jules, if we're not married to other people by the time we're 30, you and I should get married." Julie laughed. "I don't think you could handle me," she teased.

He rolled her over quickly so he now lay on top of her. Pinning her arms above her head, he nuzzled her neck before whispering that he could spend a lifetime trying. Julie didn't have the chance to over-analyze what had been said. Between his words and the hand moving steadily up her thigh, Julie soon lost the ability for conscious thought. She drifted off into blissful oblivion in his arms.

It could have been minutes or hours later when she surfaced. He was gone. Julie stared at the flower which now lay on her desk, a single yellow rose tipped in red. The card she plucked from the vase simply read “All my love."

Julie smiled at her boyfriend’s thoughtfulness, trying not to be disappointed the flowers weren’t from Eric. Forever with him? Being together without fears of watching eyes and being found out?

Julie had to stop herself from indulging in those thoughts. She had to keep reminding herself that Ric wasn’t hers.

.....

There would be others. Loves. Lovers. Time and circumstance conspired against them. Yet they always found their way back to each other.

They each went on living separate lives, traveling in different directions. Their paths rarely crossed. But no matter how many days, months or years went by, when they did come together, they would still pick up right where they left off.

Free to follow their hearts’ desires. No inhibitions. No imaginary lines. No thoughts of right or wrong. Because when they were together, nothing else mattered. No one else existed. It was just them lost in the moment.

For however long the moment would last...

.....

The doors flew open. Soft music signified her entrance. All eyes in the room were on her. Ric fidgeted nervously at the front of the room and actually stopped breathing as she began walking down the isle toward him.

A tear slid down Julie's cheek when she saw the flower tucked into his lapel.

A single rose.

Yellow, tipped in red.

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This week's theme was yellow. Although it sounded like an easy one at first, I kept getting distracted with Frank Zappa's Don't Eat the Yellow Snow... Since I couldn't really write about that, you get yellow roses instead...

18 comments:

Little Ms Blogger said...

What a great romance story - love how you profiled yellow for the story.

Brian Miller said...

for being so late last night having nothing you did a smashing job. a wonderfully romantic tale...

anthonynorth said...

An excellent romance. Nicely done.

California Girl said...

boy does this resonate!

Kathy's Klothesline said...

Sweet and sentimental....

Tina said...

Sad and sweet, love the 'tipped with red.' Passion and pain.

The Clean White Page

PattiKen said...

Lovely. Interestingly, it seems you and I both found inspiration in a single yellow rose this week.

Mine is here.

Tom said...

ooh..that was really good. Nice job.

Baino said...

Now see, that makes me cross, if all the women in all the world had husbands and lovers, what hope for the rest of us . . i'm just bitter cos nobody ever buys me flowers!

Gladys said...

Great write. You did great for someone who wondered what you were going to throw against the wall.

Jan @ Struck by Serendipity said...

Wonderful story!

I have a guy like that... if we're not married in 5 years, I might just give the same proposition.. :)

Red Shoes said...

'don't you eat that yellow snow...
... don't you go where huskies go...'
~Zappa~

A great inspiration for what inspires your muse... ;o)

This is wonderful...

~shoes~

gayle said...

So sweet ...loved it!!

Auri said...

Heart Breaking!! Sometimes I think you write with a little more of you in mind than you lead on=)

Jingle said...

neat!
Happy Easter!

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/01/lets-double-thursday-fun/

my theme Thursday post,
Happy Sunday!

Matty said...

You missed your calling Jamie. Romance Novels!

Mike said...

Wow, that was so romantic! How did I miss this one?