The bass thundered in the distance, far away from the dark corner where they hid from the rest of the world. She was still backed against the wall, arms pinned above her head by the wrists. His body was pressed firmly against hers.
Her head rolled back, exposing her neck to him, and her eyes closed. She willed her mind to go somewhere else as she struggled for control. It had been far too long. And the thirst was making her throat burn.
His breath was hot against her cool flesh. She could feel the blood flowing through his veins. Sighing softly, breathing him in, she could imagine how good he would taste. The most delicious bouquet of sensual aromas invaded her senses, making her weak with desire. The blood lust boomed in her head...
But his talented mouth demanded her attention. The vivid images of her fangs sinking into his soft skin melted away. In their place, she now very clearly saw their bodies tangled together in the moonlight.
His teeth nipped at her neck, bring a startled gasp, and turning her attention once again toward her ever growing hunger and the intense pleasure which always accompanied that first sip.
Moving with superhuman speed, she escaped from his grasp and had him against the wall. Fangs glistening in the light, she stared down at him as thirst and desired warred inside her. The vampire lowered her head for one exquisite kiss...
As her gaze drifted lower, she caught sight of the gold band sparkling on his finger. Ages ago, she had a band just like it. A husband. Kids. And it was all taken from her on the night she was turned. She had never been able to rip all that away from another. Tonight would be no exception. With one last longing look, she walked away.
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24 comments:
WOW! I love the fact that the vampire has some morality! Now I actually like her, I hope she doesn't get killed in further installments! I guess getting dumped worked out pretty good for this guy!
(There will be more installments??? right?)
Love it!
if only this would continue and she could find some other viable soul :)_
I love the charm of a serial. You work it well! Bravo!
hot. nice human side to a vampire. immortality will do that to you...learning to long for the frailty of mortality...
Aww, a vampire with a conscience.
Can't wait to read more.
Nice...I like it!
"his talented mouth"--I just got kinda stuck on that!
This is really fun.
Nice take on TT!!
xoxo
And the beat goes on...
Great stuff and she "walked away". that's a surprise. Very hot...two in a row (just read jeffscape's narrative, also erotic)
Jaime, great ending here. Caught me on that one!
Oh...wow...nice way to weave the themes together! Who knew vampires had feelings!
Love it! What's with us and all this damn vampire obsession? Oh, right... they're damn sexy! Great story, girl!
what's up with the vampire with a conscience? lol just kidding.
vampires are very sexy. ;)
Wow. It takes me places I had never been to, Good writing should be like that.
Wow,this was great!!You got a real talent in writing short stories!Really cool!:)
Just call me "Villow".
Loved this.
Ghoulish to say the least. Erotica is on the rise this Thursday.
She walked away?? Now that's self-control!
I like your phrase 'talented mouth'.
Oh- I've just seen that Leah liked that too! How funny! it jumped out at me too Leah!
"his talented mouth demanded her attention".
Oh my! I've gone faint.
Good lord woman!! Whew... is it hot in here... I'm all sweaty again and my heart's racing. God, you're good!
Why am I hearing Meatloaf in my head?
Vampire with a sense of loss.
Couldn't bite him
Thought it cost
A hunger through the night.
Love it
From scary to beautiful. I like the idea :-)
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